Since this is the Memorial Day Weekend I thought I might present a blog post that takes everyone sort of inside a part of what this weekend is suppose to be like.
Normally I don't share pieces I've written until I am completely satisfied with the finished product, however just for you guys here is a portion of this idea I got last Thursday put to paper. Or in this case computer. I look forward to your feedback because my instincts tell me there is a lot more to this than I have managed to get out of my head to this point.
The Sentinel
The lights of the capitol glitter like jewels in the distance.
Five – Six – Seven – Eight
The chill air is crystal clear so much so that I can just make out the top of the Monument in the midst of all those twinkling lights.
Nine – Ten – Eleven – Twelve
Closer by, the river winds around, a dark yet silvery ribbon.
Thirteen – Fourteen – Fifteen – Sixteen
Below me along the well-kept slopes the Garden of Stone lies shimmering in the moonlight.
Seventeen – Eighteen – Nineteen – Twenty
The stark white markers standing in seemingly never ending rows.
Twenty-One, Right Face and face the Tomb and Pause
The Tomb. Seven total pieces, seventy-nine tons of the whitest marble to be found.
One – Two –Three – Four
In the light from the full moon the marble seems to glow as if lit from within.
Five – Six – Seven – Eight
Victory gazes back at me from the carved center pane on the front of the Tomb.
Nine – Ten – Eleven – Twelve
To her right stands Valor, his countenance stern and unflinching.
Thirteen – Fourteen – Fifteen – Sixteen
To the left is Peace, her palm branch held out to reward the devotion and sacrifice that went with courage to make the cause of righteousness triumphant.
Seventeen – Eighteen – Nineteen – Twenty
On the back of the tomb is the oft’ quoted line, “HERE RESTS IN HONORED GLORY AN AMERICAN SOLDIER KNOWN BUT TO GOD”.
Twenty-One, shoulder arms rifle away from tomb, Right Face and pause again
Before me the black rubber lies stark against the grey granite marking my path clearly.
One – Two – Three – Four
Behind me I can hear the faint sounds of the city. Before me even the night seems to hold her reverence for this place.
Five – Six – Seven – Eight
I am a member of the Old Guard, My job is to protect these hallowed few. I shall never desert my sacred post.
Nine _ Ten _ Eleven - Twelve
The silence here this time of night is deep and steadfast companion. I find the silence comforting though others might not.
Thirteen – Fourteen – Fifteen - Sixteen
No one to intrude upon the majestic solitude of this place.
Seventeen – Eighteen – Nineteen - Twenty
The utter sense of solemnity that this place deserves.
Twenty-One, step off again
My footfalls are barely audible on the mat as I walk my post besides the great marble Tomb.
One – Two – Three – Four
Below me lie the graves of Admirals, Generals, even Presidents but up here are only those sacred bones of common soldiers.
Five – Six _ Seven _ Eight
My every movement is measured and careful following a tradition begun more than Seventy-five years ago.
Nine - Ten – Eleven – Twelve
My proudest achievement is that wreath I am honored to wear that identifies me as one of the 525 men who have walked their post on these hallowed grounds.
Thirteen – Fourteen – Fifteen – Sixteen
Twenty-Four Hours a day, 365 days a year we walk this post.
Seventeen – Eighteen – Nineteen – Twenty
Unwavering through all circumstances. Unflinching in any situation. A continuous, uninterrupted vigil.
Twenty-One, Left Face and face the Tomb


This is a great piece Tom! It was both moving and informative in a poetic format. I don't have any family or friends who were lost in a war but I'm very thankful for the men and women who risk their lives everyday to keep us safe and particularly for those who have paid the ultimate price with their lives. Thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteVery nice Tom; I enjoy this style of writing. I sometimes write in a similar style only I like to use lines from songs. This piece is informative to the reader and it brings us on a journey. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteAnyone who has not had a chance to visit the Tomb needs to do so. For me it ws especially moving at sunset. There is no way to describe the tremendous feelings that well-up for a regular citizen like me. I can only imagine the feeling of honor for the men chosen to guard this iconic symbol.
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